The great depression was hurting all of the workers. The government had do something about it, because everyday it hurts everyone. There were also a lot of families losing their houses. The migrant workers were the one that were most affected because no one wanted to hire them. In the story, I think it’s sad for Lenny because the other guy makes fun of him. Maybe he doesn’t mean to, but I’m pretty sure that he does it on purpose. The good part is Lenny doesn’t understand when George calls him names and other stuff. It’s also good because he wants to be more self-sufficient. He wants to do more stuff on his own. He thinks he could be self-sufficient, and when someone thinks like that they can often do it. Their friendship is good until George got angry, started to cuss, and did all kinds of crazy of stuff. Lenny always starts to mess everything up, and they always end up getting kicked out. I think their dream is possible because they just need to try really hard, and they can’t give up. They have to put their mind into it or they wont make it.
You have some good strong ideas, but did you get it edited before you posted? There are lots of small errors that take away from the impact of your writing (you actually had George and Lennie switched, I went in and changed that for you). You don't have to try and answer every question stem/idea. If you stick to one I think you will be able to make a much stronger piece. Your inferences about the way Lennie is effected by George's actions were really powerful, I would have liked to see more of that!
ReplyDeletei like your writing piece but i got a little confused in the middle because you quickly changing the story to something different and next time try to write just a little more =].
ReplyDeletethere were small errors in the start, besides that it was good.
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU!! AND ILL TRY MORE OFTN MISS
ReplyDeleteI like it, this piece gives you and idea of how they're struggling through tough times. It also explains how how George feels.Besides some small mistakes it's pretty good
ReplyDeleteWell Primo! Its Great Jus That Yuh Chanqed The Story 2 Another One! Nxt Time Write More About The First Part!=) But Yeh Its Nice That Yuh Put How They Struqqle!
ReplyDeletethank you and i will
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