Is teen pregnancy the biggest issue facing teens at Wyandotte?
What are the consequences of having babies while young? What are the challenges
these parents face? Do the teen mothers and fathers take equal responsibility
or do you feel that males have it easier?
Here at Wyandotte pregnancy is not a big deal, deal in my opinion.
Yes it’s irresponsible but it’s also responsible. What are the consequences of
having babies while young? Well you wont be able to do anything active really
like fun or anything. You can’t go out to parties or run around or anything at
all. You get stuck with schoolwork and that’s only if you attend the school and
don’t drop out. The challenges these young parents face would be (she) would
have to carry a babe for nine months plus all the cravings and sicknesses along
the way. And knowing she will have the problems of making new habits. The
men/boys in this case would be they would have to worry about money and school
and the babe so they would be just as over whelms as the woman… dose teen
mothers and fathers take equal responsibility’s or do men have it easier? In my
opinion woman have it worse then men they don’t have to worry about the babe
being healthy or feeding or changing its dippers as much as the mother. The
mother has more responsibilities then the father would more because 10 to 1
teen mothers drop out of school and the fathers don’t.
that's right girl.
ReplyDeletein my opinion pregnancy is a struggle here. there is many of girls here that are pregnant or have already had a baby before. They just don't go throw it with school and the baby, they go through it with people talking about them and their late nights and all the responsibilities they have. But other than that, your writing should be fixed, because there were a lot of errors in spelling and using the right type of words. I think you should go back and read it again and make sure it looks correct because if this was a test, this would not be a good grade. But overall the writing, the paragraph was very good.
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ReplyDeleteI thought that your word choice was very confusing. You wrote a word twice. And instead of putting babe you should have put baby or child. but other than that it was good.
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